I came across this scrap while digging backwards through some research materials for Under the Poppy, and was surprised – really surprised – to see it:

..stage, ragged blue curtains and dancing puppets and “Oh Meester,” one of the puppets croons, a lady-puppet with snarled red curls, “won’t you dance with me?  The music is so beautiful.”

“It would be my pleasure,” says the other puppet, a soldier-puppet in spurs and shiny braid.  The puppets are made to move by sticks and strings, it is something Ginevra has never seen but only read about: they are called marionettes.  At least Achille taught her to read. . . .

The puppets start swaying in their warped-flute dance but soon become hopelessly tangled, not because the puppeteer is clumsy but because he is very skillful, he has wrapped the soldier-puppet in the lady-puppet’s strings like a spider does a fly and “My mother warned me!” the soldier-puppet shrieks, and the people watching shriek too, laughing and shouting out advice – “Cut the strings!’ “Give her the boots!” – as if the soldier-puppet was a living actor.

What blew my mind about this passage was its provenance – the thing must be five or six years old.  It comes from a YA fantasy novel that I’d begun (can’t find the file and don’t remember the working title; maybe it had none?) and then set aside, having run out of fun and momentum at the same time.  There were no prostitutes in it as I recall, although there was a blind boy I liked a whole lot, and bees, who migrated to yet another book of mine (Kissing the Bee, a YA novel).  But voila, the puppets. . . . Where do we get our ideas?

This entry was posted on Saturday, November 8th, 2008 at 1:40 pm and is filed under Puppet art, Research. You can follow any responses to this entry through the RSS 2.0 feed. You can leave a response, or trackback from your own site.

2 comments so far

Clive Hicks-Jenkins
 1 

You see… UtP has been simmering longer than you thought! A dish you put in the stove, walked away from, and then forgot all about. (I did this with a tray of new season tomatoes once. Forgot I’d put it in the slow oven, only discovering the error two days later and by accident. And d’you know, they were the best damned roasted tomatoes we ever tasted!) So might this forgotten but now newly discovered puppet episode find a way into UtP II?

November 9th, 2008 at 1:45 am
 2 

The luscious, intense flavor of something reduced, cooked down, to its essence. Like haiku tomatoes! What a fantastic image.

I don’t know if the calculating coquette and the gullible soldier will make their way into UtP, but they’ve surfaced again for a reason. Maybe so!

November 11th, 2008 at 2:03 pm

Leave a reply

Name (*)
Mail (will not be published) (*)
URI
Comment